Blue Pencil Critique Session



Are you stuck? If you are stymied by structure, confused about character, unsure of your balance of show and tell, I can help.

What you get: 

  • A read-through and basic critique of 10-12 pages of your work (double spaced, 12-point font)
  • I’ll point out strengths, give you questions to consider, and make suggestions for ways to strengthen, focus, or further explore your short story or excerpt from your memoir or novel
  • Notes and in-line editorial comments will be emailed which we can then discuss in a 40-minute ZOOM meeting
  • Follow-up questions will be answered in up to two subsequent email exchanges


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